英語四級常見低分作文：5分范文

英語四級作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

1. 本題滿分為15分

2. 閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一至二份。

3. 閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對照樣卷評分，若認(rèn)為所閱文章與某一分?jǐn)?shù)(如8分)相似，即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)(即8分);若認(rèn)為所閱文章稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)則可加一分(即9分)或減一分(即7分)。但不得加或減半分。

4. 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

5. 2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。

5分——基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯誤。

8分——基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語言錯誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯誤。

11分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。

14分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順、連貫，基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。

[注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想，則給0分。]

作文分 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1

得分率 100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7

下面看一下作文得分5分的范文。

5分

Recent years, a topic of how should parents help children to be independent, which has aroused widely public attention. As far as I am concerned that is right in a sense, which parents do every thing for their children. Because of the children is parents’s all things. However, I am favor of parents should help children to be independent as soon as possible。

How should parents help children to be independent. In my opinion, parents should believe their children first. Parents should be certain with their children can recognize the true or fault and right or wrong of something. Secondly, parents had best to let their children to relize the responsity of himself and the family. In addition, parents also need to connect with their children and know about what children is doing recently。

By doing so, children may make mistake even lost their way and so on. However, don’t worried, parents. Your children must be succeed from their experience。

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