英語四級常見低分作文：11分范文

英語四級作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

1. 本題滿分為15分

2. 閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一至二份。

3. 閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對照樣卷評分，若認(rèn)為所閱文章與某一分?jǐn)?shù)(如8分)相似，即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)(即8分);若認(rèn)為所閱文章稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)則可加一分(即9分)或減一分(即7分)。但不得加或減半分。

4. 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

5. 2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。

5分——基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯誤。

8分——基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語言錯誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯誤。

11分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。

14分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順、連貫，基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。

[注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想，則給0分。]

作文分 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1

得分率 100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7

下面看一下作文得分11分的范文。

11分

Nowadays, many parents do everything for their children. They cook meals and wash clothes for their children. And they even make all the choices for their children. Everything has done by the parents and the children will do nothing but following the parents’ decisions。

In order to help children to be independent, parents should follow the suggestions given below. First, let children do some housework, such as washing dishes and cleaning rooms. These works will not take too much time, but they are suitable for children to learn to live independently. Second, give the chance to manage the family to children. As a family member, child should know how to manage the family. And the parents should teach them this kind of skills. In this way, children can learn the necessary abilities to live on their own. And most important, give freedom to children and let them make their own choice. Only in this way can children grow up healthily。

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