發(fā)布時(shí)間: 2016年11月15日
托??谡Z(yǔ)題目:
Please give your suggestions on saving our planet since we are facing serious environmental problems.
托??谡Z(yǔ)參考范文:
It is a fact that the earth is suffering from serious environmental problems and I’d like to offer the following suggestions: First of all, as water shortage is a universal problem in many parts of the world, I suggest that everyone should conserve freshwater resources by reducing our daily consumption. For example, we could flush the toilet by the water we have used to wash our face. Secondly, big cities in the developing world are the victims of air pollution, so the less use of private cars is a way out. We could take some public transportation, such as metro and bus instead.
托??谡Z(yǔ)參考答案:
Please give your suggestions on saving our planet since we are facing serious environmental problems.
Please give your opinion and explanation using specific examplesand details.
It is a fact that the earth is suffering from serious environmental problems and I’d like to offer the following suggestions:
First of all, as water shortage is a universal problem in many parts of the world, I suggest that everyone should conserve freshwater resources by reducing our daily consumption. For example, we could flush the toilet by the water we have used to wash our face.
Secondly, big cities in the developing world are the victims of air pollution, so the less use of private cars is a way out. We could take some public transportation, such as metro and bus instead.
托??谡Z(yǔ)模板分析:
1. 邏輯很清晰,措施描述的很清楚,很好;
2. 超級(jí)好!很detail而且真實(shí);
3. flush the toilet;metro and bus instead例子好
不得不說,網(wǎng)友們還是相當(dāng)專業(yè)的!邏輯清晰、細(xì)節(jié)到位、例證真實(shí)都是至關(guān)重要的得分點(diǎn)。我們也看到題目中要求我們using specificexamples and details,而Alyssa為我們完美詮釋了如何展示真實(shí)的有細(xì)節(jié)的生活化的例子。
Pt想要給大家提示的:
1. 開頭請(qǐng)轉(zhuǎn)述statement:我們看【we】 are 【facing】 serious environmental problems 與【the earth】 is 【suffering from】 serious environmental problems;
2. 環(huán)保類話題相關(guān)表達(dá)積累
1) water shortage水資源短缺
2) suggestion 當(dāng)“建議”講的時(shí)候是可數(shù)名詞,當(dāng)“暗示”講的時(shí)候才不可數(shù)。其他表示建議的詞:recommendation也可數(shù),advice不可數(shù)。
3) conserve freshwater resources 保護(hù)淡水資源
提到環(huán)境保護(hù),不妨說說保護(hù)的幾種說法:
動(dòng)詞 protect, preserve, conserve 名詞 protection, preservation, conservation
雖然都是保護(hù),但3者仍有些許不同:
A. protect somebody/something/yourself (against/from something)意思是:to make sure that somebody/something is not harmed, injured, damaged, etc.保護(hù)某人或某物不受到傷害
例如:to protect rare wild animals from extinction 保護(hù)珍稀野生動(dòng)物免于滅絕
B. preserve somebody/something (from something) 意思是:to keep somebody/something alive, or safe from harm or danger 保護(hù)某人或某物活著或免于受傷,其同義詞是save
例如:The society was set up to preserve endangered species from extinction.
成立這個(gè)協(xié)會(huì)是為了保護(hù)瀕危物種不致滅絕。
C. conserve something意思是: to use as little of something as possible so that it lasts a long time 盡可能地少用某物以便讓它可以持續(xù)很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間(這其實(shí)是對(duì)于不可再生能源的一種保護(hù))
例如:Renewable energy resources can help conserve fossil fuels and reduce carbon emissions.可再生能源有利于保護(hù)化石燃料并減少碳排放。
Pt的補(bǔ)充: 為啥要減少碳排放呢?因?yàn)闇厥覛怏w【greenhouse gas】排放到大氣中會(huì)破壞臭氧層,從而造成全球變暖【global warming】)
4) reduce our daily consumption 減少日常的消耗,the less use of private cars 減少對(duì)于私家車的使用,這里Alyssa為我們示范了兩種表示“減少”的方式。
Pt的補(bǔ)充:如果想說:減少對(duì)于化石燃料的使用,可以說【curb】 the consumption of fossil fuel.這里的curb的準(zhǔn)確翻譯應(yīng)該是“遏制”,英文含義to control or limit something, especially something bad因?yàn)槿紵剂蠒r(shí)會(huì)釋放大量的二氧化碳,對(duì)環(huán)境不利,所以我們用curb很準(zhǔn)確。但如果有同學(xué)想說減少對(duì)于稀缺水資源的消耗,用curb the consumption of scarce water resource 就不合適啦,因?yàn)槭褂盟Y源并沒有什么害處呀~ 故學(xué)單詞不要只看中文釋義,請(qǐng)一定要查看英英詞典,看英文釋義才能理解得更準(zhǔn)確哦~
6) sth. is a way out ……是一條出路
7) the victims of air pollution 大氣污染的受害者。
Pt的補(bǔ)充:此外:常見的環(huán)境污染還包括:水污染(air pollution)土壤污染(soil pollution)噪聲污染(noise pollution)
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