四級作文真題學(xué)習(xí)點(diǎn)：長假

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Topic 4 Long Holidays

I.長假給大學(xué)生帶來的好處

2.長假可能給大學(xué)生帶來的問題

3.我應(yīng)當(dāng)怎樣利用好長假

Long Holidays

As regards the necessity of long holidays, there has been aheated discussion among college students. Those who lend their support to it argue that longholidays provide them a better chance to travel around and establish broader vision. In addition,they can take part-time jobs in long holidays，which makes them get closer contact with thesociety.

By contrast，others hold that students may fail to make good use of long holidays. Instead，theybecome addicted to various computer games or just sleep a lot. What's worse, the past 5 yearshas witnessed a sharp increase in the amount of money college students spent on traveling duringthe long holidays from ￥ 368 , 000 , 000 to ￥825,000,000，which undoubtedly raise theeconomic burden of their family.

As far as I am concerned，I will strike a balance between relaxing myself through traveling orplaying games and study.(147詞)

【“一句話”點(diǎn)評】

第二段中的兩個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)將首先吸引閱卷老師的眼球，同時(shí)該句還使用了witness, sharp等好詞和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，這將給閱卷老師留下良好的第一印象。

【快捷構(gòu)思】

第一段:在模板句引人話題后接著提出首段中心“長假給大學(xué)生帶來的好處”，并用provide them abetter chance to travel around and establish broader vision和get closer contact with the society兩個(gè)原因來支持段落中心。

第二段:開門見山展現(xiàn)段落中心“長假可能給大學(xué)生帶來的問題”。而后“一句話”數(shù)例為具體現(xiàn)象展示，說明大學(xué)生在長假里花的錢很多，增加了家庭負(fù)擔(dān)。

第三段:直接展現(xiàn)自己的“騎墻派”觀點(diǎn)，句型也相對固定，且不做更深層次的展開。

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