雅思到底需要怎樣的句型
在筆者教學(xué)中，每問及各位烤鴨雅思需要怎樣的句型，答案總是：復(fù)雜的句子或長(zhǎng)難句。但是觀察學(xué)生的習(xí)作，尤其是分?jǐn)?shù)集中在5分左右的學(xué)生的作文，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)句式的銜接過于單一，比如："in our daily life, we always communicate information through the media, such as television, radio, film, these media have different advantages and disadvantages for us" (劍橋4-text1). 句子的連接逗號(hào)漫天飛，不知怎樣的pattern是合適的（你中招了嗎？）。
官方的復(fù)雜句要求
為了解決這個(gè)問題，我們先來(lái)看看官方的抽象要求，即評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的描述（以7分為例）：
- Use a variety of complex structures
- Produces frequent error-free sentences
- Has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors
綜上：關(guān)鍵詞有兩個(gè)“a variety of complex structures" and "good control of grammar and punctuation". 那我們繼續(xù)看官方對(duì)complex structure更為形象的示例：
- 帶從句的復(fù)合句
e.g. Whereas many people accept the need for exams, others are less convinced.
- 復(fù)雜的名詞短語(yǔ)
e.g. The most important reason for this problem is lack of resources and infrastructure.
- 簡(jiǎn)化的從句
e.g. Finally, budget saved can be allocated to other aspects, such as education.
- 復(fù)合動(dòng)詞
e.g. It is important to be able to use some of the structures listed here.
筆者的復(fù)雜句歸類
看到這，烤鴨們是不是有點(diǎn)感覺了，但筆者發(fā)現(xiàn)這是不夠的。為了烤鴨對(duì)復(fù)雜句更加清楚，達(dá)到官方要求的多樣化，先以一句為例，以多種方式表達(dá)，方便您模仿和學(xué)習(xí)。
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Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency and this has changed this vast world into a small village.
Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency; therefore this vast world has been changed into a small village.
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這兩種方式是以主句的形式連接，易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)是逗號(hào)不能銜接句子 |
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When Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, this vast world has been changed into a small village.
Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, which has changed this vast world has been changed into a small village.
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這兩種方式是以從句的形式銜接句子 |
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Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, thus changing this vast world has been changed into a small village.
Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, with this vast world being changed into a small village. |
這兩種方式是以短語(yǔ)的形式銜接句子 |
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