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畢業(yè)于南京師范大學(xué)，英語(yǔ)教育專業(yè)。英語(yǔ)專業(yè)八級(jí)，BEC劍橋商務(wù)英語(yǔ)高級(jí)，專業(yè)技能扎實(shí)，英文綜合能力素質(zhì)強(qiáng);教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富。有豐富的托福、GRE寫(xiě)作和雅思口語(yǔ)教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，授課風(fēng)格生動(dòng)幽默，親和力佳，能讓學(xué)生樹(shù)立信心主動(dòng)出擊，在**的氛圍下快樂(lè)的學(xué)習(xí)，**大程度的提分。本著“沒(méi)有教不會(huì)的學(xué)生，只有不會(huì)教的老師”的教學(xué)態(tài)度培養(yǎng)出了一批又一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)員。

【主講】雅思寫(xiě)作

【風(fēng)格】生動(dòng)幽默，親和力佳

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雅思鉆石基礎(chǔ)6分課程

適合對(duì)象：高二/高三英語(yǔ)程度；詞匯量在2500-3500
課程內(nèi)容：

該課程適合較欠缺中高難度詞匯，造成閱讀/聽(tīng)力理解的偏差及障礙。

能進(jìn)行口語(yǔ)/寫(xiě)作的連貫表達(dá)，但邏輯感、條理性及組織能力都較差的學(xué)生。

就讀本課程的學(xué)生需完成雅思基礎(chǔ)階段、突破階段、精品階段課程。

完成課程后對(duì)雅思聽(tīng)說(shuō)讀寫(xiě)四項(xiàng)考試達(dá)到熟能生巧的程度，60%以上的做題正確率及雅思6分以上的水平。

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雅思寫(xiě)作范文：醫(yī)院服務(wù)與病人的康復(fù)

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[題目]You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic.

A number of different medical traditions are now widely known and used: Western medicine (using drugs and surgery), herbal medicine, acupuncture (using needles at certain points of the body), homoeopathy (using minute doses of poisons), and so on. How important is the patient’s mental attitude towards his/her treatment in determining the effectiveness of the treatment?

You should write at least 250 words.

You should you your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

[提示]

你可以按照下面的提綱寫(xiě)作：

Different medical traditions (a list of examples is given)

Patient’s mental attitude: the way the patient feels about the treatment

Effectiveness of the treatment: how much better does it make the patient?

在寫(xiě)作之前，請(qǐng)問(wèn)自己以下的問(wèn)題：

Do I think the patient’s attitude is important?

What examples can I give where the patient’s attitude was important, or irrelevant?

在文章中你必須：

Describe some of the different ways people feel about medical treatment (hopeful, hopeless, trusting, skeptical...).

Say if in your opinion the feelings affect the treatment or not.

Give examples to support your argument about why the treatments were effective or ineffective.

[范文](在閱讀此范文之前你至少已經(jīng)花了一些時(shí)間寫(xiě)作)

A wide range of medical treatments is available today. Patients may wonder which will be the most effective, and whether their own mental attitude to the type of treatment might affect its success. This essay will consider the second of these questions. - Topic words used. Task of essay explained.

Many people visit their doctor or go to hospital with complete trust in the expert care offered by conventional services. However, some people do not get a satisfactory result. For example, the drugs they are prescribed may have unpleasant side-effects. Their initial positive attitude towards their treatment does them little good. - Idea in both paragraphs: that people may not get what they expect; with examples.

Similarly, those patients who trustfully choose alternative treatments over traditional medicine may find themselves disillusioned. Less rigorous qualification standards among alternative practitioners may mean that some healers give ineffective or damaging advice. The result, again, is that a patient who entered treatment with confidence leaves that treatment disillusioned.

On the other hand, patients may try a style of treatment with some skepticism. A person used to conventional medicines and drugs may be suspicious of treatments based on diet and lifestyle changes. Yet if they follow such programs, they may in fact notice improvements in their conditions, in spite of their skepticism. Equally, a patient opposed to conventional medicine may have an accident and be saved by the effective treatment of conventional emergency services. - Idea: that something you don’t like can still help you.

In conclusion, it appears that the mental attitude of the patient is not the most significant factor in determining the outcome of the treatment. Patients who enter treatment confidently may leave disillusioned while those who begin treatment skeptical of the results may find themselves surprised with what they have gained. Patients should seek the advantages which each style of care can offer. - Main argument of essay is stated.

Remember: this sample answer is one of several satisfactory ways to answer the question. Other essays which respond to the writing task would also be acceptable.

Source: Prepare for IELTS, by Vanessa Todd & Penny Cameron, 1996, UTS, Australia. For non-profit educational use only.

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