So feelings about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole， and because of this， job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that person. (順接的很自然)高手應(yīng)該做到讓段落的內(nèi)容的話題的范文不要太寬，要盡量克制寫很多內(nèi)容的沖動(dòng)。你有沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)，當(dāng)你從**句就開始寫這個(gè)話題，從寫成年人的工作對(duì)于成年人很重要的前提下，自然就過渡到了“工作滿意度“的話題，因?yàn)樵掝}窄，所以很容易構(gòu)成有邏輯)。

Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways.(羅列式中心句，就表明接下來會(huì)有幾個(gè)具體的方面需要具體展開) Firstly， a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work ， so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect. A sense of fulfillment is also(also 體現(xiàn)遞進(jìn)，內(nèi)在的邏輯) encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole. (先接結(jié)果后寫原因是高分作文特征之一，這樣能有效避免觀點(diǎn)跳躍)Secondly， when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities， (很細(xì)節(jié)，并且符合邏輯的觀點(diǎn)，也許沒有工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)的同學(xué)不能夠想到) for example， then there is a sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker. The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also(遞進(jìn)詞，體現(xiàn)內(nèi)在的邏輯) contributes to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives.(先寫結(jié)果，后寫原因是高分作文的特征之一)Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team.

Of course not everyone enjoys their work. ( 直接式的中心句，直接對(duì)于第二個(gè)問題給予回答 ) Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get.  ( 進(jìn)一步解釋 ) In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality. (分類解釋) Some jobs are repetitive and boring，and labor relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisfaction. (進(jìn)一步的細(xì)化思維)

優(yōu)秀的英文段落結(jié)構(gòu)就像“瀑布“一樣，往細(xì)化的方向不斷的展開，可以采取分組，解釋等方法，先明確的給出”對(duì)于問題回答的中心句，即先寫中心句，然后進(jìn)行進(jìn)一步展開的倒過來的細(xì)化展開的方式，而具有諷刺的是，中國學(xué)生的答案往往在段落的中間 就開始不斷的上升話題，從而產(chǎn)生很 大的跳躍，習(xí)慣于用：which will contribute to …//Ving 上升主題，**終達(dá)到 聯(lián)系到了“推動(dòng)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展， 維護(hù)社會(huì)和諧 ”的**終主題( drive the economic development and maintain social harmony ),殊不知這樣嚴(yán)重破壞了句子和句子之間的邏輯和連貫度。

However，even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work ， I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job.(典型的批判性思維的讓步句型 有承上啟下的作用。是8分作文**重 要的特征之一，從而使句子銜接變得特別到位 )  If the factors identified above are implemented， then any job can be improved and more workers can feel greater degrees of job satisfaction.  ( 批判性思維 )。

總體點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是篇題目本身非常抽象的題目，經(jīng)過作者的細(xì)化思維的一步步展開，讓我們對(duì)于 “工作滿意度” 這一抽象問題有的較為具體的認(rèn)識(shí)，但更重要的是作者將 每一個(gè)要展開的分論點(diǎn)都進(jìn)一步的解釋和分析 是得到高分 **重要的原因。另外**后一段(even though, it is not unrealistic 這樣的批判性思維能極大的提高CC連貫度)。