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雅思G類寫作范文分析:建議信 - 雅思經(jīng)驗

雅思網(wǎng)課試聽
* 建議信是對收信人就某一問題提出建議和忠告。建議信有可能寫給某個組織或機(jī)構(gòu),就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)質(zhì)量提出建議或忠告:也可能是寫給個人,就其人生的某個重大決定提出自己的建議。

o 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

寫信的目的以及所談事情的簡介,包括背景、現(xiàn)狀、存在的問題和可能的發(fā)展;

提出建議的原因;

建議的內(nèi)容;

客氣話或感謝

o 注意事項

語氣要誠懇,有禮貌;

建議內(nèi)容要具體;

可提供不止一個解決方案供選擇或一個問題的不同方面提出建議。

建議信-范例答案

Dear Sir or Madam,

As someone who has travelled throughout Asia on business and holiday I would like to give my opinion on its environmental impact. Having visited Indonesia, Thailand and Malaysia I understand that tourism can bring money to developing countries. However, this money often goes into the pockets of foreign investors, and only rarely benefits local people. Multinational hotel chains also have little regard for the surrounding wildlife when they build new resorts. This can cause many problems.

In view of these facts we, as tourists, can directly affect these countries in a positive way if we are thoughtful. When we visit these countries we can visit restaurants, bars and even hotels that are owned by local people. In addition, we can refuse to give Iuxury resorts our patronage and therefore prevent them from becoming even larger. Most importantly we should check that any tours or excursions we take have minimal effect on the natural surroundings. Finally, we can even attempt to change the behaviour of other tourists by sharing our opinions.

If we follow these simple steps we can be sure that our pleasure is not causing any harm to people or places that we visit.

Sincerely yours 建議信-開頭段常用句子

* I am writing to express my views concerning…

* I would like to suggest that…

* I am writing in reply to …

* I am writing with my suggestion about…

* May I suggest that…

* In my opinion, I would say…

建議信-結(jié)尾段常用句子

* I would be more happy to see improvements in this regard.

* I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.

* I trust you will take my suggestion into account.

* I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals/recommendations are helpful/practical/useful/beneficial.

建議信常用詞匯

arrange concern condition

consider for the sake of improve

in my opinion matter out of the question

prevent propose regard

schedule suggest unsatisfactory

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