考研沖刺高速路：英語寫作范文之四

Unemployment of College Graduates

Nowadays, unemployment of college graduates is viewed as a serious problem in China.
With the development of education, the number of college graduates has increased a lot in recent years.
However, the present situation is that the unemployment rate also becomes higher and many college graduates are facing financial pressures and psychological discomfort.
Therefore, the government must launch a major attack on the problem.

第二句擴(kuò)展主題句，介紹大學(xué)生數(shù)量激增的事實(shí)。
*句子剖析：介詞with引導(dǎo)原因狀語，increase 在這里為不及物動詞，是句子的謂語，使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)。
第三句采取和第二句現(xiàn)象的對比闡釋，揭示問題的本質(zhì)：失業(yè)率也升高了。
*句子剖析：這個(gè)是個(gè)復(fù)合句。系動詞is后是that引導(dǎo)的表語從句，其中是and連接的并列復(fù)合句。
*unemployment rate失業(yè)率；financial pressure經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力。
第四句總結(jié)全段，提出政府采取措施的必要性。
*launch an attack on…開始處理，解決某事

The reasons for this phenomenon can be illustrated in the following aspects:
For one thing, some graduates lack professional skills.
For another, the industrial structure is changing very fast and the reform of college lags behind of that process.
Even worse, most companies pay much attention to working experience which young graduates usually don’t possess.

第二句提出現(xiàn)象的第一個(gè)原因：畢業(yè)生缺乏專業(yè)技能。
*lack…缺乏
第三句提出現(xiàn)象的第二個(gè)原因：學(xué)校改革滯后于產(chǎn)業(yè)改革。
*句子剖析：and連接并列復(fù)合句。
*lag behind of落后
第四句提出現(xiàn)象的第三個(gè)原因：公司過于注重工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
*句子剖析：句子主干是companies pay attention to working experience。Which引導(dǎo)定語從句，修飾working experience。
*pay attention to…關(guān)注； possess…具備

In order to improve the situation, it is high time to take some positive measures.
First, college should reform their education system according to the society’s needs.
Second, it is necessary for the companies to offer vocational training to young employers instead of refusing them directly.
Accordingly, we will win the current war on unemployment.

第四句是段落總結(jié)句，重申以上建議的必要性。