考研培訓(xùn) 考研培訓(xùn) 發(fā)布時(shí)間： 2017年08月07日
身體健康類：
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should:
1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) state your point of view.
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He is coming back from work carrying his briefcase, and he must have stopped by the market on his way, buying vegetables and fish. As is suggested by the picture, he is exercising by waving the briefcase and basket together. |
【第一段是論說(shuō)文的圖畫描述段?！?br />
第一句是圖畫的總體描述，概括了畫面人物，人物動(dòng)作及其表情。 *句子剖析:”The picture depicts …”是句子的主干；who引導(dǎo)的從句是修飾man的定語(yǔ)從句。 第二句進(jìn)一步挖掘圖畫的細(xì)節(jié)，進(jìn)行了情景聯(lián)想。 *句子剖析：逗號(hào)連接兩個(gè)并列關(guān)系的分句?！?carrying his briefcase” 和” buying vegetables and fish”分別是各個(gè)分句的伴隨狀語(yǔ)。 *must have done…用于肯定句中，表示對(duì)過(guò)去發(fā)生事情的肯定推測(cè)。 第三句歸納圖畫的象征寓意。 *句子剖析：逗號(hào)前面是as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，后半句是句子的主干。by后面接動(dòng)詞現(xiàn)在分詞，作方式狀語(yǔ)。 |
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The picture is thought-provoking in that it endeavors to convince its audience that we can actually exercise anywhere, as long as we have the awareness of preserving health by exercise. Nowadays a large number of people engage in brainwork, and lack adequate physical movement. Moreover, many of them hold this deep-rooted view that in order to exercise they must squeeze time from their full schedule to go to a gym. Therefore they tend not to exercise simply due to their scanty time. However, the fact is that it is quite easy for everybody to exercise while walking on streets, traveling on buses, and even lying on bed—say, doing yoga. |
【第二段是論說(shuō)文的意義闡釋段?！?br />
第一句是全段的主題句，揭示了圖畫的象征寓意。 *句子剖析：句子主干是The picture is thought-provoking。In that 引導(dǎo)一個(gè)原因狀語(yǔ)從句。其中還包含有that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和as long as 引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。 *endeavor to do …“努力去做某事” 第二句用事實(shí)說(shuō)明，現(xiàn)如今缺乏體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的人很多。 *句子剖析：engage in和lack是兩個(gè)并列謂語(yǔ)。 *a large number of 很多； engage in 從事 第三句引出人們普遍持有的一種關(guān)于運(yùn)動(dòng)的錯(cuò)誤認(rèn)識(shí)。 *句子剖析：句子主干是many of them hold this view…。That引導(dǎo)的view的同位語(yǔ)從句。 * deep-rooted 根深蒂固的 第四句是由于第三句的認(rèn)識(shí)誤區(qū)所帶來(lái)的后果。 *句子剖析：這是個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，due to引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)。 *tend to do…趨向于做某事； due to 由于 第五句從正面論證：運(yùn)動(dòng)無(wú)處不在。 *句子剖析：句子主干是the fact is …，that 引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句，其中while是省略了主、謂語(yǔ)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。 *be easy for … to do...； say,在這里面是一個(gè)插入語(yǔ)，表示“比方說(shuō)” |
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I reckon that the consciousness of maintaining health is significant for both individuals and the whole society. On the individual level, it is vividly evidenced by the man in the picture that his exercise improves his health and mood as well. On the social level, the improvement in quality of life contributes vastly to a harmonious society. |
【第三段是論說(shuō)文的方法建議段。】 第一句是本段的主題句，表明自己對(duì)于以上現(xiàn)象的觀點(diǎn)。 *句子剖析：句子主干是I reckon…。That引導(dǎo)reckon的賓語(yǔ)從句。 *be significant for… 第二句是從個(gè)人的角度對(duì)主題句進(jìn)行論證。 *句子剖析：句子主干是It is evidenced that…。It是形式主語(yǔ)，that引導(dǎo)真正的主語(yǔ)從句。 *as well也，還 第三句式從社會(huì)的角度對(duì)主題句進(jìn)行論證。 *句子剖析：該句是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，主干是the improvement…contribute to… *contribute to 促成； harmonious society和諧社會(huì) |
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