TOEFL寫作考試中需要避免的兩大事項

托福寫作 避免重復(fù)

1. 在托福寫作中，盡量避免重復(fù)使用同樣的詞匯?；蛘哂械臅r候雖然詞匯沒有重復(fù)，但意思卻有重復(fù)。這時候可以做一些簡化的工作。例如下面這個例子：：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

large 對一個farm來說就是size方面的large，所以insize可以去掉，改為：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

更簡潔的表達(dá)方式為：

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2. 有時一個詞組可以用一個更簡單的單詞來替換，例如：

My grandfather has said over and over again that he hadto work on his parents' farm.

這里的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly，顯得更為簡潔：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to workon his parents' farm.

托福寫作 避免空洞的單詞和詞組

1. 在托福寫作中，一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來任何相關(guān)的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子：

When all things are considered，young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents， in my opinion.

這句話當(dāng)中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives thantheir parents.

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2. 有些空洞和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式可以進(jìn)行替換，例如：

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under anobligation to help their parents， they did not have theoptions that young people have at this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子，可以替換，簡化為下面的表達(dá)方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help theirparents， they did not have the options that youngpeople have now.

以上就是小編為同學(xué)們介紹的TOEFL寫作考試中需要避免的兩大事項。希望同學(xué)們能夠注意寫作的技巧，不要因為一些細(xì)節(jié)問題沒有注意到而影響考試分?jǐn)?shù)。

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