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新托福寫作范文及解析【綜合 獨(dú)立】

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摘要:新托福寫作范文及解析【綜合 獨(dú)立】!托福寫作對(duì)于考生們來說可以比較自由地發(fā)揮,但是很多考生們并沒有思路。下面小編為同學(xué)們介紹新托福寫作范文及解析,同學(xué)們可以參考。

托福寫作范文及解析【綜合 獨(dú)立】。托福寫作對(duì)于考生們來說可以比較自由地發(fā)揮,但是很多考生們并沒有思路。下面小編為同學(xué)們介紹新托福寫作范文及解析,同學(xué)們可以參考。

〖綜合寫作〗

關(guān)于 mima mounds的三個(gè)行程theory,但是教授不同意

Reading1 :manual labor理論,說因他們都是orderly arranged所以native Americans 為了bury ceremony人為制造的;

Listening1:反駁閱讀,雖然人用mound 建造burial,但目前沒見過有mima建的,mima里面沒有human remains;

Reading2 :認(rèn)為loose soil是和earthquake 一起造成的;

Listening2:反駁,認(rèn)為地球上有很多條件符合卻沒形成mima;

Reading3 :認(rèn)為mima是由一種動(dòng)物挖洞丟出的mound形成的;

Listening3:反駁,認(rèn)為沒有人真正見過挖洞,并且可能是其他東西造成的洞穴,正好被這個(gè)動(dòng)物發(fā)現(xiàn)他適合居住所以就住進(jìn)去了.

〖獨(dú)立寫作〗

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Some agriculture methods damage the environment, but providing the food for the growing world population is more important than protecting the environment.

話題分析

這次的考試話題屬于托??荚?/u>中的老話題,關(guān)于現(xiàn)代化農(nóng)業(yè)對(duì)環(huán)境的影響和環(huán)境保護(hù)之間哪個(gè)重要的比較類型話題。對(duì)于廣大托??忌鷣碚f,可以說是相對(duì)比較簡單的話題, 也應(yīng)該在考前做過相關(guān)考題的訓(xùn)練。 重點(diǎn)在于對(duì)比農(nóng)業(yè)提供食物和破壞環(huán)境二者之間的比較。

話題解析

開頭:

背景(industrial agriculture, increasing population) 話題 個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)(建議采用折中式,二者同樣重要)。

主體:

第一段:表明提供食物對(duì)人類的重要性( providing food for a growing number of people is more urgent than the protection of environment), 食物對(duì)人們的生存是必須的(necessity).而隨著人口的增加,提高產(chǎn)量(crop productivity)是第一事件(top issue)

第二段:環(huán)境保護(hù)對(duì)于人類的重要性,過度的農(nóng)業(yè)發(fā)展使得環(huán)境破壞了(The most obvious and detrimental impact of modern agriculture methods is environmental degradation, especially by the over utilization of chemical fertilizers and pesticides)。并且有些破壞是不可逆轉(zhuǎn)的(once the environment on which we depend on is disrupted, our lives are placed at risk)對(duì)人們?cè)斐珊艽蟮?

People will suffer from diseases and the government will shoulder considerable medical bills.

結(jié)尾:

表明自己的觀點(diǎn),二者是同樣重要(providing food and protecting the environment are equally significant for the long-term development of people)

參考范文

Currently, as the population increased, agriculture serves as an increasingly important role in people's daily lives since it could provide people with the basic necessity of eating.It has long been a highly contentious issue that agriculture methods damage the environment, should these methods continue to apply in agriculture?Which is more important? Providing food or protecting environment? In my opinion, providing food for growing population and protecting the environment are equally vital.

First, food as people's basic necessity is an essential ingredient of people's lives, so it is important to increase crop yield as many as possible. As we all know, the total population in the world is approximately 7 billion, which is an enormous number.And the population is growing day after day. It is necessary for us to grow more grain and vegetable to meet the significant demands of large amount of people. As a result agriculture methods appeared. Personally speaking, I think there is a natural tendency to take advantage of fertilizer and pesticides as well as other methods to boost agricultural productivity. Only in this way can the problem of food shortage can be effective controlled. Without rich food yield majority of people are much prone to live a meager life rather than a decent life. In general, the advantages of utilizing agriculture far outweigh its disadvantages. This is the principal reason why supplying enough provisions is important.

Further, environment is an equally indispensable part for people since the earth is the only family for people so far. Everyone is obligatory to protect the environment. In addition,factories are supposed to avoid making pollution. There is much controversy on whether agriculture methods such as pesticide, fertilizer which jeopardize the environment should be applied, some claim we should stop such approaches which improve the agricultural output. From my perspective, however, we should not stop utilizing all the agriculture methods but invent new methods which will not adversely affect the environment. Scientists and researchers should be organized by the government to produce new and harmless methods which can apply in agriculture without any damage in environment.

In conclusion,providing food and protecting the environment are equally significant for the long-term development of people. It is the earth that the only place we could live in, therefore protecting the environment is our responsibility. In addition,providing food for increased people is also necessary for reason that eating is people's basic necessity. We should promote the development of agriculture methods and of environment protecting simultaneously.

上述就是小編為同學(xué)們介紹的新托福寫作范文及解析【綜合 獨(dú)立】??戳松鲜龅姆段闹螅瑢W(xué)們可以作為參考,模仿范文的寫作方法,相信大家一定能夠快速提高自己的寫作能力。


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