2016托?？谡Z模板及參考范文：藝術(shù)和科學(xué)選課

托?？谡Z題目：

Which class would you join for fun? Art class or science class.Please give your reasons with details.

托?？谡Z參考范文：

Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me because I'm just the one who has no passion for anything about art. Most of the time, when others are appreciating a great work of art, I will just count when the class will end. Sometimes, I may even have to drink a lot of coffee before the class to prevent myself from falling asleep during the class. By contrast, in the science class, it is so interesting that I hardly feel bored. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscovered asteroid, all of these can spark my interest and I am overwhelmed by tons of the secrets of the cosmos.

托?？谡Z參考答案：

Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me instead of [than] art class because I am the one who likes doesn’t like/ has no passion for things of art. Inthis way, Most of the time, when the others are appreciating a great aunt art work, I will just count how long will the class end the class will last/ when the class will end. Sometimes, I even may/ may even have to take some measures to prevent myself from falling sleep asleep when/ while my classmates are immersed in a passionate work of music art.

However, in the science class, it is so interesting that I can hardly be distracted by the surroundings. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscoverted undiscovered asteroid, all of these got my attention arouse/ spark my interest/ arouse/ spark/ awaken/ pique my curiosity. And I was overwhelmed by tons of secrets of the cosmos.

托福口語模板分析：

請不要把than和rather than相混淆。形容詞比較級后邊要接的是than，表示“做比較”，如果是rather than = instead of，意思是“而不是”。故可以說：I think A is better than B. 或 I would choose A rather than B. 但是不能串了，I think A is better rather than B.

口誤可不行哦!既然觀點(diǎn)是：選the science class，那必然是對藝術(shù)的事情都不感興趣咯，所以，這里應(yīng)該是一個(gè)口誤(比較嚴(yán)重哦，障礙到了對方的理解)

In this way, 的意思是“依照這種方式，”但是，在這里沒有什么方式，所以改成了Most of the time，意思是“大多數(shù)時(shí)候，”表明這是一種常態(tài)

In this way的正確用法示范：I highly recommend that you should join YEEAOO's 晨讀團(tuán) because in this way, you can not only improve your English, but also make a lot of new friends.

PS: 所以你看，這就是為什么can的否定式，必須寫成can't或者cannot(連在一起)，因?yàn)榭崭裰笸耆遣灰粯拥囊馑寂?這里不是can的否定式cannot(不能夠)，而是：can not only(不只是能夠)!!!

the others這種說法是錯(cuò)誤的，如果是the那就是：the other，表示是2者中的另一個(gè)(one 和 the other);要么就直接others，很多個(gè)里邊的其他幾個(gè)

How long后邊是引導(dǎo)的如果是一個(gè)簡單句的問句, 則will需提前

但如果how long一道的是整個(gè)句子的賓語, 那就用正常語序

這里的take some measures to prevent myself from falling asleep:

A. take some measures的說法不夠具體：請問，究竟是采取什么樣的措施呢?建議改為說某種具體的措施：比如，課前喝超多咖啡，課前用涼水洗臉，上課的時(shí)候把老師的臉想象成自己的idol等等~

B. fall asleep(形容詞，作表語，表示“睡著了”的狀態(tài))

when/ while my classmates are immersed in a passionate work of music art. 為了確保主謂一致，把classmate改成了classmates(后邊是are)同時(shí)，因?yàn)閍rt class實(shí)際上指的是“美術(shù)課”，所以不建議說a work of music。PS: work在當(dāng)“作品”講的時(shí)候，是可數(shù)名詞哦~所以，這里加a是正確噠~

However, in the science class, it is so interesting that I can hardly be distracted by the surroundings.

A. However, 表示“轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系”，但是，這里是表示“對比關(guān)系”，建議改為“By contrast/ In contrast,”

B. 上文說的是：美術(shù)課會讓我覺得很想睡覺，很想下課——就是無聊嘛。那么，下面對比的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該是說：科學(xué)課讓我覺得不無聊?？墒莄an hardly be distracted by the surroundings的意思卻是讓我不分心/注意力更集中。建議改為：hardly feel bored

【修改后的版本】

Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me because I'm just the one who has no passion for anything about art. Most of the time, when others are appreciating a great work of art, I will just count when the class will end. Sometimes, I may even have to drink a lot of coffee before the class to prevent myself from falling asleep during the class.

By contrast, in the science class, it is so interesting that I hardly feel bored. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscovered asteroid, all of these can spark my interest and I am overwhelmed by tons of the secrets of the cosmos.

托?？谡Z模板分析：

本文來自亦鷗晨讀團(tuán)網(wǎng)友stellast，超萌的發(fā)音!非常詳細(xì)的內(nèi)容!

請大家注意：口語答案要求我們提供【details/ examples 一定要在答案中體現(xiàn)細(xì)節(jié)和例子】!stellast同學(xué)在這一點(diǎn)上，為我們做出了相當(dāng)棒的示范!她在描述science class的有趣時(shí)，引入了非常多的細(xì)節(jié)，在充分論證的同時(shí)還展示了自己所掌握的豐富詞匯，可謂一箭雙雕!希望大家都可以向她學(xué)習(xí)哦!

此外，她在本文中，實(shí)際上只說了1個(gè)理由：對art我根本不感興趣，覺得無聊。然后進(jìn)行了正反對比論證。這也是一種講托福口語的方式。

在此，說一下本題的幾個(gè)常見錯(cuò)誤發(fā)音：【不要亂加r系列】

1. fun 不要發(fā)成“放”!

2. art 不要發(fā)成aunt, 要發(fā)出r的音哦!

3. science 不要發(fā)成"散s"，應(yīng)該是/'sa??ns/!

類似的：surroundings /s?'ra?nd??/ 也不要忘記發(fā)n

4. passion /'p??(?)n/不要發(fā)成pension/'pen?(?)n/ 主要就是注意元音的發(fā)音，是/?/不是/e/5. passionate 同理/'p??(?)n?t/，一定要注意兩個(gè)a的發(fā)音哦!

6. mysterious 不要忘記濁化s之后的t

類似的：station, stand, stunned; street, stranger, stress

7. curiosity 這個(gè)詞有好幾個(gè)音節(jié)，不要吞音哈~因?yàn)楸容^難發(fā)音，所以范本答案中，我們改成了interest~

8. overwhelmed over的v請不要忘記輕咬下唇~

接下來，Pt來介紹一些值得積累的表達(dá)：

1. 【have passion for sth.】對某事懷有激情

2. 【Most of the time,】大多數(shù)時(shí)候(大多數(shù)人 = most people, a majority of people，如果說most of the people意思是“我們中的大多數(shù)”，而且，后邊要加定語來修飾限制people)

E.g. Most of the people who are reading this article have already been a member of YEEAOO's 晨讀團(tuán). 【Sigh..... 所以說，才想求轉(zhuǎn)，給更多人看到哇!】

3. 【appreciate a work of art】 欣賞一件藝術(shù)作品

4. 【prevent sb. from doing sth.】阻止某人做某事

5. 【fall asleep】睡著

6. 【during the class】 在課上 還可以說in a/the class

7. 【hardly feel bored】從不感到無聊 (hardly 相當(dāng)于一個(gè)否定詞)

8. 【mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscovered asteroid】神秘的黑洞，神奇的萬有引力和尚未被發(fā)現(xiàn)的小行星

9. 【arouse/ spark my interest; arouse/ spark/ awaken/ pique my curiosity】 激發(fā)我的興趣/好奇心

10.【be overwhelmed by sth.】使某人感到非常驚訝

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