托福寫(xiě)作范文：公司應(yīng)提高員工工作效率和業(yè)務(wù)熟練度

　　2016年8月16日托福寫(xiě)作考情回顧：

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The most important investment for a big company is to improve the efficiency and proficiency of its employees?是否同意下列觀(guān)點(diǎn)： 對(duì)于大公司而言，最重要的投資就是提高職員的工作效率和業(yè)務(wù)的熟練程度?(舊題重現(xiàn))

　　相關(guān)提問(wèn)：

　　1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: most businesspeople are motivated only by the desire for more money? 是否同意大多數(shù)商人的動(dòng)力是賺錢(qián)?(2008年8月16日)

　　2. Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. 有人喜歡為大公司工作，有人喜歡為小公司工作，你喜歡哪種選擇?

　　主題觀(guān)點(diǎn)：公司最好的投資是提高員工的工作效率和業(yè)務(wù)精通程度

　　思路拓展：

　　原創(chuàng)語(yǔ)料庫(kù)：

　　1. In addition to polishing up the skills of the employees, there are a great many things a company can do to make their businesses more successful. 除了提高公司職員的技能， 公司還可以做很多事情使公司變得更加成功。

　　2. invest in the training of their employees v投資職員的培訓(xùn)

　　3. generate more economic value v創(chuàng)造更多的經(jīng)濟(jì)價(jià)值

　　4. inject new life into the further development of the corporations v為公司的發(fā)展注入新鮮活力

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：inject new life into v注入新鮮活力

　　5. enhance the competitiveness of the firms in the fierce competition v在激烈的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)中提高工作的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力

　　6. Large-scaled enterprises typically have established standards for management and employees and therefore have recognized employee-training programs and standardized dispute resolution strategies. 大型企業(yè)有其對(duì)于管理和職員的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，因此，大企業(yè)通常有經(jīng)過(guò)時(shí)間檢驗(yàn)的員工培訓(xùn)項(xiàng)目以及標(biāo)準(zhǔn)化的爭(zhēng)端解決策略。

　　7. produce more professionally well-trained staff v 培養(yǎng)更多的專(zhuān)業(yè)上訓(xùn)練有素的職員

　　8. employees are less likely to make mistakes v 職員們不太容易犯錯(cuò)誤

　　原創(chuàng)范文：

　　首段：背景介紹 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) 作家立場(chǎng)

　　The competition amongst different corporations have become increasingly fierce, therefore, it is not rare to see that some large-scaled companies typically have established standards for management and thus have recognized employee-training programs and standardized dispute resolution strategies. As a result, people have been pondering for many years whether or not the most worthwhile investment is the cultivation of employees’ abilities without reaching any definite consensus. For my part, I strongly insist that with a view to generating more economic value, the companies should sponsor the training for their employees to promote the staff’s efficiency and proficiency. (96)

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　1. it is not rare to see that ……　這一點(diǎn)很常見(jiàn)

　　2. people have been pondering for many years whether or not　…… without reaching any definite consensus 關(guān)于是否……，人們思考多年沒(méi)有達(dá)成一致觀(guān)點(diǎn)

　　3. with a view to doing sth = in order to do sth 為了做……

　　二段：第一個(gè)論據(jù)支持作家立場(chǎng)：

　　For a start, the reason why I take utilizing the financial budget to prefect the techniques of the employees as the most advantageous alternative is that the motivation of the employees will be highly inspired, in this sense, they can fulfill their tasks efficiently. To illustrate, as an English teacher, I am provided the chance of polishing up my teaching skills in Beijing New Oriental Company every year, I have more working zeal after receiving professional training because the sense of being valued and respected by the corporation I am serving really rewards me. So, my personal experience leads me to believe that highly qualified and frequent trainings enable the workers to devote to the companies more actively, it is conceivable that profits the corporations could make will be greatly increased if their employees have access to regular on-job training opportunities. (141)

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　1. the most advantageous alternative n 最具優(yōu)勢(shì)的可選擇的方法

　　2. polish up my teaching skills v精進(jìn)我的教學(xué)技能

　　3. the sense of being valued and respected by the corporation I am serving really rewards me 被企業(yè)重視和尊敬的感受使我受益

　　4. it is conceivable that 可以想象的是 ……

　　5. have access to regular on-job training opportunities. 可以獲得在職培訓(xùn)的機(jī)會(huì)：

　　二段：第二個(gè)論據(jù)支持作家立場(chǎng)：

　　In addition, this debate reminds me of my uncle, Paul, who just has a similar experience. He has been carving out his own career after graduating from college. In the past, when the new employees were hired, they needed a long period of time to adapt to the working condition and familiarize themselves with the procedures by observing other experienced employees’ performance. Then，my uncle begun to provide professional course to make them qualified adequately. Hence, new employees are less likely to commit blunders and more likely to excel in the work obligation quickly. The experience from life tells us a truth that optimizing the skills of the workers can, to large extent，help the companies to compete for the lion’s share in the market. (127)

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　1. He has been carving out his own career 他一直在自我創(chuàng)業(yè)

　　2. new employees are less likely to commit blunders 新員工不太容易犯大錯(cuò)

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：commit blunders = make mistakes v 犯錯(cuò)誤

　　3. excel in the work obligation v更加精通工作

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：be proficient at = be well-versed in = excel in v 精通于……

　　4. optimizing the skills of the workers v 改善職員技能

　　5. help the companies to compete for the lion’s share in the market v幫助企業(yè)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)市場(chǎng)中最大的份兒(比喻用法：指提高企業(yè)的經(jīng)濟(jì)效益：可以寫(xiě)作廣告)

　　三段：讓步段：除了提高職員技能效率，公司還有何種投資是有價(jià)值的，再加以反駁

　　However, I have to concede that there are a great many things a company can do to prosper and stabilize their businesses. More precisely， companies can allocate the financial budget to advertisement of the relevant products or betterment of the equipment. Notwithstanding all that, it is the individual who has the most integral role to play in the companies, the benefits other activities can bring about are obviously dwarfed. (63)

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　1. prosper and stabilize their businesses v 繁榮和穩(wěn)定企業(yè)

　　2. allocate the financial budget to v 把財(cái)政預(yù)算分配給 ……

　　3. notwithstanding all that 雖然如此

　　4. has the most integral role to play in …… 可以發(fā)揮最重要的作用

　　5. the benefits other activities can bring about are obviously dwarfed. 企業(yè)其他行為可以帶來(lái)的利好明顯微不足道

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：dwarf v 使顯得矮?。?

　　尾段：再次亮明觀(guān)點(diǎn) 總結(jié)理由

　　Overall, I would like to re-affirm my conviction that the most essential investment is the betterment of the employees’ skills because workers’ motivation can be highly stimulated provided that they are proficient at the tasks in which they are doing. In light of this statement，only when the business owners make efforts to perfect the efficiency and proficiency of their employees can the companies maximize their economic profits. (68)

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　1. workers’ motivation can be highly stimulated 職員的工作動(dòng)機(jī)會(huì)被激發(fā)

　　2. are proficient at the tasks in which they are doing v 精通于正在從事的工作

　　3. companies maximize their economic profits 企業(yè)可以實(shí)現(xiàn)利潤(rùn)的最大化

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