雅思寫作之地圖題中可用的摩登句型

   　寫作中，第一幅圖為靜態(tài)地理位置描寫，并不算難;但當描述到第二幅圖的時候，許多同學徒有一些表示“擴建”“縮減”“被替代”的詞匯，卻不知道到底如何寫出高分句子?，F(xiàn)在就是用句型讓他們發(fā)揮作用的時刻了，快，我們一起來精讀一段范文吧：

　　In the present-day town, a great deal changed.

　　分析：主題句，概述這個小鎮(zhèn)經(jīng)歷了很大的變遷。

　　Perhaps the most noticeable change are those relating to transportation.Our modern-day needs are very different and so the roads have been improved andtraffic lights, a roundabout and a zebra crossing have been added, as well as anextra road. Increased traffic means that a car park has now replaced Goode Farmand the fields that are located at the top of the 1700 map.

　　分析：此段首先采用被動語態(tài)，最顯客觀。分別用‘have beendone’的結構，即現(xiàn)在完成時搭配被動語態(tài)，一舉通吃，描述道路被修繕了，安全島和斑馬線被增建了，時態(tài)和句型都有加分。其后，一個停車場取代了原來的Goode農(nóng)場，此處句式進行變化，回歸主動的敘述，A取代B的句型，毫無重復。這一段，我們積累的必備句型為被動式：Ahave been v-ed (eg. added/removed etc.) 主動式：B have replaced C

　　Housing is another area where many changes have been made. While in 1700there were few houses, now there are rows of houses and a block of flats insteadof the stables.

　　分析：總起“房屋是另一個變化所在”，然后采取時間前后對比描述，’While in XX there were..., now thereare...’ 一前一后的對比，十分清晰，這同樣可以作為重點句型的積累，但是特別注意描述過去的情況用過去時，描述現(xiàn)在的情況回到一般現(xiàn)在時。

　　A further development is the supermarket and the hotel, which have beenextended.

　　分析：前面已經(jīng)用過對比句型，為了避免重復，范文再次為小烤鴨指引航向，一個非限定性定語從句：’..., which has/havebeen...’的結構，將變化之處再次明確表達出來，讓人眼前一亮。此句可總結為’A further development is the..., whichhave been...’

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