四六級寫作沖刺備考：常見錯誤分析（二）

(三)一致方面的錯誤

在一個句子內(nèi)部或緊鄰的兩三個句子之間，要保持時態(tài)、人稱、數(shù)等的一致。

(誤)Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

(正)Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

【說明】代詞應(yīng)與所指代的先行詞保持人稱和數(shù)上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

(四)平行結(jié)構(gòu)方面的錯誤

這里專指語態(tài)、比較級、非謂語形式、冠詞用法、可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)名詞、不定代詞單復(fù)數(shù)以及時態(tài)等錯誤。

1.a.(誤)Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

(正)narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

b.(誤)A great change has been taken place since then.

(正)A great change has taken place since then.

c.(誤)But it may occur some new problems.

(正)But some new problems may occur/arise.

d.(誤)Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

(正)Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

【說明】happen，take place，occur，arise等動詞和動詞詞組一般既不能用作被動結(jié)構(gòu)，也不能作為及物動詞帶賓語的。但學(xué)生作文中類似的錯誤較多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

2.(誤)The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

(正)The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

(誤)Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

(正)Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

(誤)Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

(正)Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

【說明】這些都是在使用比較形式時出現(xiàn)的錯誤。尤其是第1例較普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

(五)斷句方面的錯誤

一句句子沒有結(jié)束，又開始新的一句，結(jié)果造成句子結(jié)構(gòu)不全，這就成為斷句。

(誤)TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

(正)TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

【說明】以because，since，if等引導(dǎo)的從句是不能獨(dú)立成句的，只能依屬于主句，所以不能寫成另一句。

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