托?？谡Z(yǔ)真題答案老師點(diǎn)評(píng)(7)

【托?？谡Z(yǔ)真題答案老師點(diǎn)評(píng)(7)】在托福備考過程中，考生最為關(guān)心的是，托?？谡Z(yǔ)怎么練的問題。本文中新東方在線托福網(wǎng)為大家?guī)硗懈？谡Z(yǔ)答案及對(duì)應(yīng)的老師點(diǎn)評(píng)。通過針對(duì)性的口語(yǔ)點(diǎn)評(píng)，發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的缺點(diǎn)，大家才能更快地提高口語(yǔ)水平！

托?？谡Z(yǔ)真題答案范例：

Sample response 2 P325

The man thinks that the university decision is wrong. According to his opinion, the bus　shouldn’t be eliminated. It create a lot of job. And he thinks basically the bus rout should be　changed. Due to due to the existing bus roup, many students can’t average to afford the bus.　And the overcrowded parking lot is added problem, which is also due to the uh not writing　uh university bus. If the students hasn’t a car, and if they cannot afor cannot afford the bus　then few student drive a car and obviously overcrowd the parking lot. But is better to meet　the change of the bus roup and um most of student should use the bus… (120words)

托福口語(yǔ)真題答案老師點(diǎn)評(píng)：

Rater’s Comments:

1. The speaker’s first language moderately influences her pronunciation, intonation,　and pacing. This creates some listener effort.

考生的母語(yǔ)在某種程度上影響了其發(fā)音，語(yǔ)調(diào)和語(yǔ)速

2. She provides content that is relevant to the task, but her limitations in language use　hinder her ability to accurately convey relevant details.

她提及了相關(guān)內(nèi)容，但她較弱的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力妨礙了她準(zhǔn)確地轉(zhuǎn)述相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)。

3. She fills the entire time with understandable speech.

她在一分鐘內(nèi)持續(xù)說完了她基?上能被理解的答案

4. However, she incorrectly repeats throughout the response time that students cannot　afford to ride the bus. She also says that few students will drive cars and overcrowd　the parking lots. This creates confusion for the listener. The speaker never mentions　the man’s concern about increase noise and traffic on campus.

然而，她在整個(gè)一分鐘內(nèi)重復(fù)，錯(cuò)誤地說“學(xué)生們坐不起車”。她還說“只有少　數(shù)學(xué)生會(huì)開私家車，并使得停車場(chǎng)變得擁擠”。這會(huì)讓者困惑。關(guān)于“男生對(duì)校園里的噪音和交通擁堵會(huì)增加的焦慮”她只字提。

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