有效的高考作文寫作方法

        一：開頭

 

　　句子的開頭方式，不要一味地都是主語開頭，接著是謂語、賓語，最后再加一個狀語?？梢园褷钫Z置于句首，或用分詞做狀語等。

 

　　〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.

 

　　〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.

 

　　〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.

 

　　〔修正〕Hearing the bad news， the young man couldn’t help crying.

 

　　二：經(jīng)過

 

　　2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運(yùn)用諸如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞狀語等。

 

　?、購?qiáng)調(diào)句

 

　　〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday.

 

　　〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.

 

　　It was yesterday that I met him in the street.

 

　?、谟蓋ith或without引導(dǎo)的短語。如:

 

　　He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.

 

　?、鄯衷~短語。如:

 

　　Satisfied with the result，He decided to go on with a new experiment.

 

　　④倒裝句。如:

 

　　Only in this way can we achieve our goal.

 

　　Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.

 

　　Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent person.

 

　?、菔÷跃?。如:

 

　　If so，victory will be ours.

 

　　You can make some changes wherever necessary.

 

　　3.通過分句和合句，增強(qiáng)句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。

 

　　〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.

 

　　〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.

 

　　〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.

 

　　Some told stories. Some played chess.

 

　　〔修正〕After a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing， telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同長度的句子，要結(jié)合使用，不能只用短句或只用長句。

 

　　4.學(xué)會使用過渡詞。如:

 

　?、龠f進(jìn): then(然后)， besides(還有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外)等。

 

　?、谵D(zhuǎn)折: however(然而)， but(但是)， on the contrary (相反)， after all(畢竟)等。

 

　?、劭偨Y(jié): finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in brief(總之)， in conclusion(最后)等。

 

　?、軓?qiáng)調(diào): indeed(確實(shí))， certainly(一定)， surely(確定)， above all(尤其)等。

 

　　⑤對比: in the same way(同樣地)， just as(正如)， on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。

 

　　相似的比較： similarly, in the same manner 相反的比較： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,

 

　　5.注意使用詞組、習(xí)語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。如:

 

　　〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.

 

　　〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.

 

　　6.避免重復(fù)使用某一單詞或短語。如:

 

　　〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

 

　　〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

 

　　I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.

 

　　三、 結(jié)尾

 

　　1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……（比如說到和諧社會 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.）

 

　　2、 Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……

 

　　3、 As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.（我們必須采取一些有效的措施來做些什么）

 

　　4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……

 

　　5、 Obviously（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.

 

　　一些用法：

 

　　1、 陳述個人的觀點(diǎn)

 

　　It is alleged that(據(jù)說)

 

　　In my view, both sides are partly right(兩方面都部分的正確)

 

　　As far as I am concerned(就我而言)

 

　　As regards to me

 

　　My own point of view is that……

 

　　Personally, I believe that……

 

　　My experience tells me that……

 

　　The invention of the handset, I dare to say, turns out to be a tremendous hit.

 

　　The application of web sites, I dare to say, turns out to be a greatly hit.

 

　　It comes as no surprise that Chinese economy becomes increasingly hot.

 

　　2、 陳述別人的觀點(diǎn)

 

　　Other individuals, however, take the attitude that……

 

　?。ㄥe誤的觀點(diǎn)）sb is under the false belief that……

 

　　3、 圖表作文

 

　　The table shows\indicates\ reveals that ……（表明、暗示、揭示）

 

　　According to the statistics showing in that graph, we can easliy see\found……（根據(jù)表中的數(shù)據(jù)，我們可以看見，發(fā)現(xiàn)）

 

　　As seen from the chart/ As is portrayed in the picture

 

　　Sales went into a slight decline=sales declined slightly(小幅下降)

 

　　Sales declined dramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely (大幅下降)

 

　　A brief glimpse at our campus (the picture/cartoon/caricature) vividly shows that mobile phone, becoming more and more prevalent.
 

 

　　好的替代

 

　　the machine\the device 代替 computer

 

　　handset代替 cell phone

 

　　*The Middle Kingdom代替 China

 

　　intensely\crucially important代替 very important (it is crucially important that the benefits of collective be on our priority.)

 

　　approaches代替 ways

 

　　current(currently) 代替 now

 

　　growing individuals代替 more and more people

 

　　individuals/ characters/ folks 代替 people, persons

 

　　positive, favorable, rosy(美好的), promising(有希望的), perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, 代替 good

 

　　unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill 代替 bad

 

　　an army of, an ocean of, a multitude of 代替 many, a lot of

 

　　take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that 代替 think

 

　　affair, business, matter 代替 thing

 

　　for my part, from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion

 

　　beneficial, rewarding 代替 helpful

 

　　exceedingly, extremely, intensely 代替 very

 

　　pour attention into代替 pay attention to

 

　　bear in mind that代替remember

 

　　enjoy, possess代替 have

 

　　to name only a few/ as an example代替for example/ instance

 

　　常用短語

 

　　老年人the old\elderly\ aged\ elderly population\ senior citizens

 

　　年輕人youth\youngster\ young adults\ adolescent

 

　　中年人middle adults

 

　　網(wǎng)吧cyber café 網(wǎng)蟲mouse potato 電視迷couch potato

 

　　優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生outstanding/superior/rare/top students

 

　　壞的影響ill effects

 

　　農(nóng)村rural 郊區(qū)suburban 城里urban

 

　　在當(dāng)代社會in contemporary society

 

　　雙贏a win-win situation 雙輸 a lose-lose situation

 

　　建設(shè)有中國特色的社會主義build socialism with Chinese characteristics ,form a economic system with Chinese characteristics

 

　　寫信中

 

　　I would appreciate it very much If you ……

 

　　I am thrilled to receive your mail.

 

　　Looking forward to a prompt response.

 

　　好的短語

 

　　1、 have growing respect for 越來越重視

 

　　Coincident with the fast growing economy, China has growing respect for protecting the environment and controlling population. 隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的迅速發(fā)展，中國也越來越重視環(huán)境保護(hù)和控制人口了。

 

　　2、 enable sb to do sth （使某人可以做某事）

 

　　It enable us to build a harmonious society.

 

　　3、 另外 In addition/ Additionally/ on top of that

 

　　Additionally, there is another reason for the appearance of this phenomenon.(現(xiàn)象)

 

　　好的句子

 

　　The real power resides in the people.(真正的權(quán)力屬于人民)

 

　　We must fight against the bureaucracy in order to improve governmental work.(為了提高政府部門的工作效率，我們必須與官僚作風(fēng)作斗爭。)

 

　　Litter by little, our knowledge will be enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.(慢慢的，我們的知識會充實(shí)，我們的視野會開闊。)

 

　　As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.(常言道，任何事物都有兩面的。)也可以用 every sword has two edges. Everything has both dark sides and bright sides.

 

　　Taiwan is an integral part of China.(臺灣是中國不可分割的一部分。)

 

　　最簡單的格式

 

　　Coincident with the fast growing national economy, there exists an unfavorable壞的現(xiàn)象 (favorable好的現(xiàn)象) and prevalent phenomenon in China. It is estimated that (相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)，例如：eight out of ten individuals possess a handset十個人中有八個有手機(jī)了).

 

　　Why have there been so many (某種現(xiàn)象)? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. Firstly /in the first place (原因一). Besides,/secondly (原因二). On top of that/additionally (原因三). the main cause of (某種現(xiàn)象) is due to (最主要原因). It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, (解決辦法一). On the other hand, (解決辦法二). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of (某種現(xiàn)象).